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Fountain Pen

Tongue upon the pen
Tossing wishes in the ink
A bloody lion’s den
For those who cannot think

Justice has been served
In this coronary lie
But words are never heard
In the blink of an eye

And so I ask of you
This cockamamie verb
What is it that you knew,
To turn the answer of a curb?

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  • Iridessa MoonFlower
    September 15

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    Welcome to AllPoetry!

    WOW! I really like this a lot. Wonderful flow& rhyme. My favorite line was:
    "Justice has been served"
    Thank you for sharing, if youever need anything please do not hesitate to ask. Again welcome!
    ~~Shannon~~
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  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    September 15

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    Welcome to AllPoetry!!!

    This is a very interesting poem, indeed...finding a muse to write about can be impossible at times, so the pen sits anxiously, as it awaits your words...
    Welcome to AllPoetry! I hope you have fun on this site!


    Blessed Be,
    Jeremy
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  • raspberry Greeters member
    September 14

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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    When such objects are chosen and written about, the object raises its own value and so does the poet.. for its the work of a creative mind alone!! Brilliant..
    Cheers,
    Archana
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