Gliding gracefully
through the air
each different bird
has their own story.
Memories lay deep
inside their minds
of what findings
they have seen in the day.
The blue sky
opens up to them
as they explore
what they can see.
Trees are a resting place
where they can sit and reflect
twitter all day long,
making songs of joy.
Author notes
Photo: "Birds flying overhead" by Ewa Zauscinska on www.art.com
A contest entry
- Photo art prompt by Mallig.
900 points, ended September 23, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I found this peaceful, did you?
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Very nice
I so lvev to listen to the birds singing such praise and joy to the world about them
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Lovely and peaceful indeed. I enjoyed the perspective of this. Thank you for entering!
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Very peaceful and calm. A joy read ^^
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oh my my
this was a unique view point of the bird community and you painted a very charming picture. I loved this poem for its uniqueness and the message...it sent across.Thanks for sharing...visit me and comment me if you can dear -
Oooh I like
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Thankyou ^_^ :]
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Nps! My comments aren't often that insightful >.>;
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Lol
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Yuhuh
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a nice lil piece youve written here my cupcake it felt peaceful and relaxing, kinda how it is when you watch birds huh?
nicely done!
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i liked it. a very different piece than your normal. GOod luck in the contest!
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Thanks! I kinda thought it was too, its peaceful (:
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that was wonderful =]
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Thankyou :] <3
Did you manage to find when we met on here yet!? xD hehehhh. -
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Nope! I got the general time though. My mom was yelling for the laptop and I thought she was going to hit me right upside the head so I gave it to her real quick! Sorry I disappeared on ya.
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Ahh whats the general time? :]
Oh its fine!
<3
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