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Alone, without a home.

And hello there dear,
How does it feel sitting on that throne?
You're a queen without a home.

And hey there lover,
Why must I be a queen that feels so alone?
I'm not there with you, I feel so alone.

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  • Jaded Juliet
    September 23

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    Cute. Extend on it. You keep writing all these short little things, and they are great, and they have so much potential. Play on it. It could be something MAGNIFICENT.


  • Serene Rose
    September 14
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    i am confused by this. think ya could explain to me what it means? lol it rhymes though, and flows great, so good job on that