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~My Lord's Grace~


Your Noor outshines the universe which your hands have built.
  Your Hub exceeds all hearts which your holiness have made.
    Your Ne'ma overflows all kindness which your fingers have woven.
      Your Samah passes all wisdom which your generosity have cluttered.



O' God, you're the one who speaks to us
in musical miracles,
unexpectedly throwing chances beneath our feet.

O' Lord, you're the sky's soul & the reflection
of blue upon the sea, the voice that whispers
in my withered ears with the blowing winds.

O' Allah, you whose name is carved upon
everything, bestow this fragile heart your grace!

O' God, you listener to all words spoken,
seer of all that's coming, savant of all that's gone,
embracer of all that's happening,
send your angels upon this soul to cleanse the sins
this mortal body been desiring.

O' Light of suns and stars, speaker of all tongues,
healer of all wounds, forgiver of all wrongs,
merciful of all faithless, father of all humans,
don't abandon this worthless being whose hands
are too short to reach your heaven, whose words
too small to behold your greatness and grace.

O' Generous, I seek, we seek you... in darkness of life.
I crave, we crave your love to be poured upon our heads.

O' Lord, God, Allah, Light, Generous...
and all the names you gave your majestic self...
by them, please don't forsake your servants.

Your promise I behold upon holy water from Zamzam,
drops from your throne... upon your earth.


Amen!








(C)Noor 9/13/2009

Author notes

Contest prompt:
Oh God ! you are the most curious help to every one of us... Unknown.

'God leads and I follow then to wherever he does point, me do march'~ My motto
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Foreign words I used in this write, Arabic words:
- Noor: Light
- Hub: Love
- Ne'ma: Grace
- Samah: Forgiveness
- Zamzam: A well that was revealed to Hajar, the wife of Abraham (Ibrahim) and mother of Ismael as she desperatly seeked water for her infant, God throw the ground open with water running out of it at the feet of Ismael. The water of it is holy and is used for Tat'eer (Cleansing).
More can be found here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Zamzam_Well

Picture found on Google.

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  • Macsword
    September 27

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    And Whoosh!

    You sweep the reader up in this wonderous and powerful prayer. There is no escape from the love and devotion shown the God of the universe. Congrats on a solid write poet; truly Gold worthy.


  • Mr.
    September 19
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    This is a beautifully written poem.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    September 18

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    The depth and the praise for HIM stated here in the poetic light brings the message of the truth here..and that is strength of this wonderful poetry..thank you so much..


  • Ken-Maverick
    September 13
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    Spiritually so,
    veery well done.

    Ken


  • Vernal Bloom
    September 13

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    Oh my! Oh my dear believer! How your words are so true and how they go to my heart and spirit! You have had a beautiful conversation with Allah! How you made me proud of yourself with such beautiful words you shared here! My love and respect to you increase day after day! I also found the AN useful though my Arabic is not bad and I knew most of them myself!
    Thankee hun for the lovely poem again, i'm gonna print it and read on days of need and wish you the best luck in the contest

    ~Massy~

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