Voices scream
as I cut
stupidgirl
shut up! I say,
try to cry
fatgirl
be quiet,
I cut them out
uglygirl
want to scream, can't
want to be happy, can't
stupidgirl
beating inside me
is the pain they call life
fatgirl
I bandage the dripping mess,
try to clean up
uglygirl
flush the evidence
pink sadness swirls down the toilet
stupidgirl
What did you think?
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i love it. its beautiful.
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This poem is very strong and powerful and it paints a picture in my mind and the picture I get makes me very sad. This is a very moving poems and I really like this one!
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I find myself moved by the powerful images in your poem and also saddened by the sadness conveyed. xx
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very sad imagery and powerful words, great write xxx
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I like this poem...sad part is that it describes a part of me...thanks for writing this i love it
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