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Dreamers eyes


Dreamers eyes
Detailed in sweet surrender
And cradled surprise
Hidden depths
And disguised love maculated disguise
To see all bounties
In the dreaming state of her eyes

Forbidden charms
Deadly, innocent
In silent desire intonation
The incarnated passions
Reaching out in kind
Like broken pieces touching you
As you come closer and closer
In for the kill

Will that love be yours
Will that love be ours

Deep psychosis, paranoid state
Mind prolific human care
Caged chains like flowers
Surmounting, inferno tempting bliss

With a devils kiss
Jealous of angelic angels
Fallen out of favour
In words of sweet bird songs of joyous hate.

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  • Macsword
    September 14

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    Good opening...

    to a write that seems sadly dark and ends with a sad note of disfavor.