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Never Goodbye

Everything is quiet
when the darkness is no longer my enemy ,
but a long lost friend
My eyes closed
and my breath still,
your love and memory sustains me
in this place.

I recall every word and intention.
You are eternal.
Though my body may be silent
and pain no more,
like a dove you lift me
beyond where I was.

Come close now
I will whisper
the words you need
to hear.

I will help you see
my goodbye
is never the end.
Only a beginning
somewhere
with the same words
I always say
to you
On my last breath.


I'll talk to you later. I love you.

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  • Rose Patrick
    September 20

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    This is a very beautiful poem baby but it is one that breaks my heart, for as you know this is something that I could just not handle.It will be hard for me any time that is for sure but this soon of lose your mema I just could not take it. SO you just have to ask God to help you to get better. You have to do your part too though just because you get to feeling better don't start over doing it are you will be defeating your self. give you body a little time to get back some of what it has lost. I love you and no matter how old you get you will still be my baby