Drawn by the winds of time,
unattached,uncluttered figments drift
hopelessly, helplessly onwards,
to a void of nothingness.
Swept ever onwards.
ever searching ....
Strings of awareness touch
the senses, in Butterfly kisses,
lightly, fleetingly,
too swiftly,too soft.
Drawn ever upwards,
slightly out of reach....
Checked thought captures
straying memories,
but only for a moment,
and not carbon copies.
In a list
Please tell me what you think
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Very amazing very beautiful and well written You are blessed with the gift of imagination that is vivid and the ability to write lovely verse.Please keep sharing...
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How you chose to express yourself is what makes your input unique and qualifies your poetry as art. This is a poem with flow and style with thoughts being exchanged and reinforced through the collaboration of the conscious and the subconscious waging a battle for recognition.
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This is a very beautiful poem, It was so soft and gentle like trying to catch a feather lol thats what I thought anyway
great write
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very unique I must say, and heartfelt!
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Oh man, I LOVE the title! So amazing!!! Very original and unique. And so raw and true.
Keep writing!
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Thank you...delighted that you enjoyed it
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good stuff
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Thank you
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NICE!!
You did well here...
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Thank you
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Intriguing; most intriguing, for I love the imagery which floated through my mind as I read this. A very fine philosophical, almost metaphysical write. Thanks for sharing this one with us. -
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Delighted that you enjoyed it Many thanks for the kind comments
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this is wonderful,
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Thank you
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How wonderful to see a new posting from you, Lynne. We've missed your words, my Friend. This is a lovely and thoughtful piece, as always. 
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Thank you sweetie...great to see you as well. Have missed you all so much but health is improving and am feeling ready to face the keyboard once more Many thanks for your lovely comments, as always very much appreciated
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