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Relief

sparse droplets squandered
parched porous ground
Texas tears of joy

A contest entry

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  • Brook-1 gold member
    November 7

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    This is a very nice short form of poetry. Thank you for letting me read your work. You did a nice job here with great imagery. Congrats on your broze trophy too. It was worthy of winning.
    Brook


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    October 31

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    ahhh the dreaded drought,
    oh but the drops that fall are
    heaven sent, feeling like a
    miracle.

    beautifully penned

    Love and blessings

    Rend

  • poets whisper silver member
    October 5

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    We lived in San Antonio for 12 years ... I loved Texas. Everything really is bigger including the bugs! Nice job with the write. Good imagery in such a brief write. Nice form.


  • Malabu
    September 15

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    love the imagery here...
    and sometimes it rains too much
    congrates on the trophy hun
    mal


  • Arkbear gold member
    September 14

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    ......oh yes.....Texas and their droughts.....nice thoughts and visuals here....thanks for entering Sis,

     

     

    Bear

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