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Blind Man

written on July 18th, 2005


Walking by the field,
With a stick in his hand
He can't see with his eyes,
But with the stick he feels the land.

He's steady while he's walking,
Over the rocks or sand,
He's still walking on,
with a stick in his hand

He can't see with his eyes,
But he never accepts defeat,
He walks without seeing,
Oh! What a great feat.

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