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Topsy Turvy

I see the number 999
Embedded in my brain
It's time I think to drink more wine
It's driving me insane.

The clock is ticking in the hall
as seconds slip away
I see an eerie darkness fall
and wish that it was day.

I count the footsteps on the stair
and feel a sudden chill
I hear a whisper in the air
It makes me feel quite ill.

The devil pats me on the back
He's up to his old tricks
for cricketjeff has got the sack
It should read 666.

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  • cricketjeff gold member
    October 6
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    Sue is right, Jeff does

    A genuine Gwenevere, in your lovely flowing style

    Thanks a lot for the entry.

    Jeff


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    September 13
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    This is a fun read and made me giggle ... I think Jeff will love it

    All the best in the contest

    Sue