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halo halloween

halo halloween
it is nice to meet you
it has been a long time
i have missing you all the past seasons
your costumes are out of this world

halo halloween
may i borrow your lipstick
my little brother dislikes you
he confuses you with angel of death
he also refuses to borrow me his matchbox train


i have a crush on you
also on a boy i attend school with
he freaks out when i mention our friendship
am i a freak
has it got something to do with the devil

halo
can you hear me
you have been on earth for a long time
why cant you speak
how deep is your love

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  • individuality gold member
    September 15

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    a superbly written piece of dark poetry presented here, it dances and smiles across the waves of the night as fright gathers death's train of thought and love's magical ways, crushing the heart with ease.


  • Violet Moodswing Greeters member
    September 14

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    Ok, i dont quite get it but I still enjoyed reading it umm more than once. That is always a nice effect. About the time I think I am figuring it out I realize that I havent. Of course, that is one of the fun things about poetry