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eclipse on the beach

i thought i was my reflection,
i saw me in the eye of god

the sun and moon made love on the beach
while the stars watched the magnificent sight
blinded by the beauty of it all

everything is a passing phase,
merely a moment frozen in existence

the grim reaper passed away last night:
his last words were, "glory not in victory"

everything is a passing phase,
merely a moment frozen in existence

the ancients measured time in months

8/18/09
8/19/09
8/29/09

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  • SilverRain
    September 13

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    I really liked this! "the sun and moon made love on the beach," that was my favorite part, very nice!