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my heart

my heart

coffee in hand,
cigarette in other
i thought perhaps
my thoughts i'd smother

today,
tomorrow
forever and ever

i hate
having
to wear a sweater

when all
i want
is for it
to rain

to take
away
my mourning pain

and also my morning pain

the waking,
the aching
of my heart

you
oh you
tore me apart

and now
i weep
as it turns fall

you were my life
my world,
my all


i fall
to pieces
broken
apart

never
again
will i give
my heart

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