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High Ground

I went to the mountain
while in las vegas
only 91.95 off season

And hoped to see you
in the flat terrain

Your image shimmering
off the dessert floor
but you did not appear

With your tiny ears
with the little gold
earrings that day at work

That tightened in my
mind so much

I had to run out at break
to try to breathe
my brain
jarred and frozen

But six years after
thinking you would
blow in, you haven’t

So I’ve taken advantage
of the sale
and pressed on to arizona 

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  • PrInCeSsOfRoCk gold member
    September 14

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    great piece my friend. i really felt it, the hopeful longing to see someone...remembering back when you saw them. well penned as always