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Fan

A fan in the ceiling
Making air to keep me cool
Going 'round and 'round in circles
Like another puppet fool
I control it with a button
To turn it off and turn it on
Let it spin around in circles
What a great useful tool!

It doesn't know I'm the master
It has no heart nor mind
It doesn't know it's my slave
Because it's very very blind
(So) I will use it when I want to
Every day and every night
Let it spin around in circles
So it can make me feel alright.

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  • Over Zenith
    September 20

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    I like this, and have written things similarly, sometimes it does feel like we're just cogs in a machine being told to spin faster faster, and going around in circles just gets you where you started. The search for freedom, I hope won't lead me to no where. Very good analogy!

  • Espantapajaros
    September 15
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    will there be any personal freedom in the future?

  • Espantapajaros
    September 14
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    a higher power.

  • Espantapajaros
    September 14
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    Very true

    nobody comments so i'll comment on myself.
    Reminds me of the media. This can be a boss. a politician. a higher order. Where do you stand with your personal freedom.