The agony welling up from deep within shakes me,
spilling out all these bottled up tears.
I want to strike out and SCREAM -
but you've chained and gagged me with your tyranny.
Each day is more strained than the last,
paining me as I struggle to keep living like this.
Any short-lived happiness swiftly ebbs away,
any spectacular victory, rubbed dull.
And in moments you've deemed it all worthless.
My thoughts are nothing.
My feelings, unnoticed.
My voice is silenced.
Give me some constructive critisism.
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Great imagery here, the comparisons of these feelings with the bottomless abyss of a black hole. Well done dear poet, do keep writing and thank you for commenting on my poetry.
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