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End to the stagnant

Todays a double header,
Maybe a I can make this one better,
Emotions lined up and Minding their manners
Instead of wildly waving banners

Not begging for attention
First I'll call sadness up with a hand motion.
Why do I only seem to write when dramatic things happen
Over the years my writes come and go again

Next is loves turn to speak
It is always at its peak
I'm sorry to any i have hurt along the way in Love's Glorious name
I am the only one who is shamed by the blame game

I always fall behind in my writing
Or just keep rewriting the same thing
I've tried giving people advice to protect them from my mistakes
Whether or not it has is like hoping for that certain prize in the cracker jacks

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  • Now I can relate to that. I've just lost my words it seems when I try and write something. Then when I go to read it later, I find that I've wrote something almost exactly like it. Its terrible and heartbreaking. Thank you for the entry and know you aren't alone.

    Me,
    Tay Christine.