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Keep it to yourself.
Players ain't part of my game.
I rolls with those completely genuine.
I only deal with respect.
I don't get played;
My flow shall not be disgraced.
My swagger is laced
With individuality,
Givin' you a sip of reality.
Sorry to disappoint,
I don't mean disjoint
You from my life.
And though it hurts like a knife...
I'm just not interested.
So quit tryin'
Cos I know your kind.

Was that too...what's the word...ghetto? Haha no seriously what do you think? I don't normally write like this so I tried to be creative.

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