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People With Everything

Some people have everything.
They never have to worry,
unless they want something.
And even then its usually,
if not always, for themselves.
They shall never know
what it is to be alone.
They will never weather a storm
that could pull them apart,
or taken care of someone
who would never care for them.
They don't even try to see
the trail of hate and destruction
they leave behind.
They have but one duty,
a duty to themselves.
They have everything
and will not share
and yet, the man with nothing
would give his last dollar
to help a fellow in need.
Under-people have learned to give,
not to take,
whereas, a top person takes.
They see it.
They want it.
They take it.
They don't care.
They never care.
Why should they?
They already have it all.

Author notes

i was really pissed when i wrote this. its a long story as to why. but ya. there it is.

eh, not too good, but what you think?

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  • Playstation2004
    September 23

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    Great job of expressing a hard emotion to think too long about. Hope things get better for ya


  • Starcrossed Dreamer
    September 12
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    It's better in college. I promise.

    Lovely job. I remember feeling that way.