Rub a dub dub dub
ducks getting married in a tub
Mr. duck in a tux and Mrs. Duck in a little white dress
and all of their friends are truly impressed
What!, ducks getting married, that's absurd
you may think that but obviously you have not heard
Ducks can have quite the sexiest of fun
as we shall soon see on their honeymoon run
I have heard Mrs. Duck wears the sexiest Victoria's secret lingerie
and dances around wildly on the catwalk making Mr. Duck want to play
soon duck moans are to be heard all over duck town
as Mr. Duck strips off her sexy silk gown
he quacks as he lays her down on their feather bed
and caresses her and pats her on the head
they sure know how to do it right
as they lay in their feather bed at night
but there is one problem as you shall soon see
and it is a real problem indeed
Mrs. Duck forgot to bring along her duck control
now her pregnancy can no longer be patrolled
soon little ducks will come along one by one
and they are sure to have a ton
I have heard little ducks are truly fun
they will keep Mr. and Mrs. Duck on the run
Well that concludes the story of Mr. and Mrs. Duck
so if you wanted to hear more you are plum out of luck
but maybe one day soon I will write
about how Mr. and Mrs. Duck and the family take flight
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I collect rubber ducks(not for myself)
but for my 7 yr old niece.
I'll have to keep an eye on those naughty lil things
This is so very creative !
The flow and rhyme
perfect!
Thanks for sharing Sis
~Pastel
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lol I love you sis and yes make sure those naughty duckkies behave themselves!!! I collect rubber ducks infact I gave them a bath today!!!! Someone gave me bride and groom rubber ducks that are like the ones on my background!!!!! I am glad that you like t
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such rubber ducky fun! this is a sweet and sassy lil write dear sis!
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I love u so so so much sis I am glad that u liked this piece and thank u for the beautiful bg u made for it!!!!
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Nice write!
Very creative, with, ahem, lots of imagery.
Keep up the good work!
-Buster
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thanks for reading glad that you liked it. I had a lot of fun with this piece!!!!!
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Fantastic, brilliant piece for me to start the day with, but think I might have images in my head all day now, brilliant write
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LOL glad that you enjoyed my little Duckie write and I hope that you didn't have creative images in your head for too long!!!
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Brilliant Catherine
You brought a smile to my face here this evening
and how lovely a story, and a lesson too
remember duckies take precautions
before you get overrun with those cute but expensive little ducklings
Cant wait for the next one sis
Love ya loads and take care
Julie
xx
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I am so glad that you liked this sis I had a feeling that you would. I love you soooo much and thanks for ur lovely comment!!!!!!!
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very cute
You are the first to have me to picture ducks on a honeymoon. It a very sweet and at the same time pg13 type poem.
One thing I ask is sis, don`t write yours honeymoon fun on here. If you do, just warn me okay. I your brother, I don't want to know. Really don't
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Ok big brother I promise that I won't and if for some reason I were too I will def tell u first ok!!! I am glad that you liked my piece!!!!! I love you and look forward to hearing from u!!!! Lots of love!!!!
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Awesome Lil Sis...
I love this...
It made me smile all the way through with its light tone, fun imagery & delightful storytelling...
Impressive as always...
Keep up the good work...
Well done!!!
I Y
U LIL SIS...
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Thank you swoooo much big brother your comments so sweet as always I am glad u enjoyed it I love you so very very much!!!!!!! You are so wonderful!!!!!!
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Oh my what a pure delight this was to read, what a wonderful fun little poem you did pen.
Thank you so much for sharing this little gem.
awannabepoet
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This is so very cute! I think it's absolutely adorable and you had me smiling throughout the entire poem, Bravo! Bravo! I love you Sis!
Love,
Amera♥
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Reading it again I see it's really only in one line I feel you could have them, I think I made it sound like all over the place but not so. Your poem is a lovely little poem, full of sexy imagery to delight both young and old. Anyway it is this line here, ''what ducks getting married that's absurd'', which you change to, ''What!, ducks getting married, that's absurd''. I'm not an expect but that's where I'd put them. It was a joy to read your piece again this morning.
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Thank you so much my friend and again I am so glad that you liked it!!!!
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This is a really an adorable poem
I love the imagination that you have brought forward
Awwwww, the little Ducks are soooooo cute, all dressed up
but they will soon have their wings full
with many ducklings swimming about
Can't call them the "Mighty Ducks,"
they are indeed the "Naughty Ducks"
"Mrs. Duck forgot to bring along her duck control
now her pregnancy can no longer be patrolled"
A BIG OPPS
Both a charming and lovely poem you have penned
Keep your talented quill dancing
Much love and many blessings
David
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Thank u soooooo much for your wonderful and lovely comment You are so sweet I am glad that you liked this piece!!!!!! Lots of love!!!!!!
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How did you get so sweet...
you must have taken classes or something....
This was written so well too lass.....
you should think of writting childrens poems and storys...
Love it little gypsy.
You have sweet sweet talent...
Bless your heart always,
Liam
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awww you are too sweet big brother thanks for your lovely comment and for reading this I love you a ton!!!!!
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aaww..
very very adorable! l.o.l. love the duckies!! you penned a sweet and kinda sassy lil piece sis.. way to go!
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Thanks big brother you are so wonderful I love you a ton thank you for reading this and for ur wonderful comment to me!!!!! I love u!!!!!
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This poem could do with some commas here and there, for this type of portry needs them. Still it is so sweet, a lovely poem you have indeed penned here. Your rhyme is well done, ''duck control'', how clever. Though why lay all the responsibility on Mrs. Duck, surely Mr. Duck if he wants to quack away ( do duck business ) with his lady, he should know about duck control. LOL! I am sure the kids are going to love this poem, and some grown ups alike. I myself loved the read, a nice change of pace from what I usually read.
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my dear friend where are the commas needed I am not sure where to place them. Thanks for ur lovely comment and I am glad that you liked it!!!!
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now this tickled me
lol i am reading it to Johnnyd
and he said it was adorable as well
lovely job sis
love you
Passions
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I am glad that you liked this sis thank you for ur sweet comment I love you dearly dearly!!!!
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This is just so adoreable. Ypou had me laughing the whole way. I can picture those two getting up to there little ducky things. Oh, mrs duck forgot the duck pill....shame! shame! shame!...well, not really. I love ducks. This is just so super. It had a great story to it and now that they will have youngsters on the way, perhaps this will be turned into a trilogy. How they take flight...hmmm, don't know whether they are getting up to mischief with this statemtn but we shall have to wait and see. I love the pictures you used, they are so cute.I also love the way some of your verses tended to be a little longer than the others. This i saw as pretty good as it was a sort of an expanation in between the rhythmed verse. Perfect rhythm and rhyme and the flow simply amazing. I love all stories that wind around animals so this one really sat beauifully with me. Thank you so much for sharing. Everyone is going to like this one. Truly well done indeed.
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I am so glad that you enjoyed this piece I had lots of fun writing it I read it to Josh over the phone and he laughed and thought it was great I hope that others will like it as well!!! Thank you so much for you lovely comment I truly appreciate it you are so wonderful dear friend!!! I love you bunches!!!!
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