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Chains

She's Jealous of her
Her's jealous of She
over little ol' me

Stop the fighting
over little ol' me
I just want to be free
of your jealousy

She hurts me
Me hurt She

Jealousy is destroying everything
from the sand
to the sky
It can do anything
yet does nothing
Free

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Written April 4th, 2004

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  • GanjaGodess
    April 11, 2004
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    i appreciate that though these girls are fighting over you--you feel uncomfortable, not proud. way to go


  • April 5, 2004
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    POWERFUL

    WOw..
    you always seem to be unique in your writing... I love it..and its a great thing ...
    ***et3rnaldarkn3ss***