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A Swiss Cheese Poster

Gimme Gimme Gimme
You're always wantin'
Always Yearnin'

Why can't you just be happy with what you've got.
Why can't you strive for what you have.

You'll soon get yours
You'll soon get yours

Gimme Gimme Gimme
Such a bother
Go ask your brother

Hand me downs and broken pencils
You'll soon get yours

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Written April 4th, 2004

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  • April 5, 2004
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    Grrrrrrrrrrreat!!!

    gReaT joB...amazing work on this one...
    I know HoW thIs goes...Great wOrk...HoPe U conTinUe WrIting MOre..

    MucH reSpEcT...
    ***et3rnaldarkn3ss***