Love blooms with its petals bright
shining light on darkened heart.
Life becomes a state of bliss
when we kiss, a work of art.
Soulmates sing a song of love
blessed above with no regret.
No closer bond can there be
family tree born from duet.
Author notes
Form: Cywyddau (cywydd) Celtic
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A contest entry
- Good Form Old Chap! Good Form!!! Capital...Capital! by Darianna.
1500 points, ended September 30, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Nicely done and true to the form in its content. As a Welsh poet I have to say our forms are extra hard in English. Awesome work
Jem
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Wow, this seems like a very difficult form. I am impressed with it. Thank you for entering. Excellent work on this and I wish you the best of luck in my contest.
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Congrats! I found this form difficult and I wrote a poem that took over a week!
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Thank you,
I had originally written this poem for Little Eagles Unusual Forms Contest.
But then I noticed it was in no way connected to the prompt she had assigned to me. Boy was I pissed off!!! Like you I had some trouble with this form. So I'm sure you understand being pissed off over the prospect of writing another one! Heheheheh
Bill
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This poem made me smile a lot! You have cleverly used this form to reflect the theme you have chosen. Beautiful! A Family tree in blossom! I love it!
Thank you for sharing this form with me, I shall give this one a go! Thank you also for entering my contest!
Best Wishes,
Dari xxx
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