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Taken

Taken by your presence
Taken
by you

Typically
No one understands
I'm happy
being taken.

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Written April 4th, 2004

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  • scarlett rose
    April 10, 2004
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    good job! it was short, sweet, and to the point! many people enjoy being taken by the presence of someone they love! i loved it! keep up the good work!

    ~meg~


  • April 5, 2004
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    PUrTyFUL job...
    Loved It ...every single word of it left me in awe...Great work
    ***et3rnaldarkn3ss***