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The Emu

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Once there was an emu -  lived in the great outback
He camped along a river where the winding track ran back
Where river gums were sprawling and the crocs all sunbathed long
An emu on the river danced and sang a silly song

When Mollie the koala passed she had to stop and see
If it were true the emu was as silly as can be
She sat atop her feeding ground and gazed on down below
To see the emu do his dance and sing up quite a show

Now Ben the old man kangaroo saw Mollie sitting there
Laughing loud and cackling as she gazed out there somewhere
He followed where her eyes did lead and saw what there she saw
The emu on the river bank and dancing up a storm

And kookaburra Kelly flew in on the morning flight
And took a perch to watch the show that was a crazy sight
While maverick the dingo stood upon the rocky hill
And watched the other critters watch the silly dancing dill

12.9.2009

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  • TerriMac gold member
    October 22

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    ha ha love this and the fab pic that moves! how did you do that!
    This is my kind of poem very very well penned !
    Keep em coming !


  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    September 27

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    Great!

    I enjoyed this so much & now I see you write delightfully for children also. I'll bet you could fill up a book of poetry for children. This child just had great fun reading this. for this PM chuckle.


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    September 18

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    JUST TO PRECIOUS

    sitting here over my morning coffee i find myself lost in a world of fun and laughter...as a emu dancing to her on beat and friends gather round to join in her fun...i laughed so hard i spilled me coffee all over me...this is simply awesome...you have such a wonderful gift na dear sister..i can see you entertaining young and old with these wonderful tails of fantasy o' do keep up this precious gift bestowed upon you

    • condor gold member
      September 18
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      Thank you, my dear friend. Sometimes a little strangeness passes over and well, what can you do? Thank you so much for coming by. Very much appreciated.

  • Topnotchsy
    September 15

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    I've gone from never reading a poem about an emu in my life, to reading two in a matter of minutes, both of which were extremely well written, though each with an entirely different feel. Great write here!!


    • condor gold member
      September 18
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      Thanks, mate. I am so glad that both caught your eye. Your visit is much appreciated once more.


  • arafura gold member
    September 13
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    Great work as usual!


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    September 13

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    Haha this is truly gorgeous I love, just adore that last line 'silly dancing dill'
    What fun and incredible poem Thank you so much for bringing a huge smile to my face


    • condor gold member
      September 13
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      Glad I could make you smile. Thanks for reading.


  • princessleejwctlvr2
    September 12

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    this is so funny and I must say fantabulous and fun!!!! You did an incredible job with this piece this is wonderful and the picture is cute!!!!! I really do love this wonderful piece!!! You never cease to amaze me with your wonderful pieces!!! Well done!!!


  • rbruce gold member
    September 12

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    Great stuff

    Nonsensical content made entertaining and humourous by a skillful writer. Go with the flow anytime dear poet. I love it. Very well done.


  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    September 12

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    This is great...

    This reminds me of a song years and years ago and I can't remember what it's called. It was about all these Aussie animals...hmmmm now that's gonna bug me
    Now back to your poem. I think it is a wonderful write and would make a good childrens story


    • condor gold member
      September 13
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      Thanks, sweetie. That is really so nice. I like animals so it is east to write about them.

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