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Mr. Blob

Would you like to hear a stupid song?
with a stupid voice?
If you say so
You say
so.

A horrid song
heres the awful voice
singing
stinging
piercing

Did you like my stupid song?
With my stupid voice?
If you say no
you say
NO

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Written April 4th, 2004

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  • rexi and eso
    June 8, 2006
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    um well, i like the name of the poem...very random, but what do i know about randomness? why am i even comenting? im bored as hell i tell you!


  • April 5, 2004
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    Great.

    haha...this one was great... i loved it... i know how you feel bout you thinking you dont sing good...but well im sure u do..cause if your the one singing the Kmart song...then u got taleNT! lol...your awesome
    ***et3rnaldarkn3ss***