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Screw-Up

Stop clapping
and lying
Stop Smiling
and Decieveing

Start leering
Critize me
Start Laughing!

You know you want to
You know you'd like to
You know you hate me
I know you hate me

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Written April 4th, 2004

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  • April 5, 2004
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    BEAUTIFUL!!!!

    HEY!!! WOW!! i really loved this one...especially the end..

    You know you want to
    You know you'd like to
    You know you hate me
    I know you hate me

    That part was really awesome...i like how you linked that all together...You'Re sO taLenTed!...KeEP uP thE gReAt WOrk....
    ***et3rnaldarkn3ss***