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all slipping through our fingers
too soon,
too fast to say goodbye,
can't thank them for loving us,
for teaching us,
for helping us become what we are today.
In a flash they all disapear,

What I am left with?
Death and Despire,
pain,
loss,
and a feeling of being empty.
Part of me is gone forever,
gone from sight
from mind
from body,

We love you all,
please rememeber us,
look after us,
guide us through this life with out you,
we charish you,
and shall never for get

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  • the Ness of ur pain
    September 13
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    this is beautiful hon. i know the second stanza's a bit darker, but the last one really pulls it up from that. luv it and LOVE YOU!!!!