I watch you laughing with her.
Seeing you as you kiss her.
Watching as you hold her.
Do you not see me?
I was once your best friend.
Now I mean nothing to you.
I thought I was doing great at pretending I didn't love you.
Do you not see me?
I had acted for so long.
It became routine.
I wanted so much more than friendship.
Do you not see me?
Finally I'm turning away.
Reluctantly moving on.
Still wondering,
Did you ever see me?
I'll love you till I die.
There's a place in my heart just for you.
Still I wonder while I try not to cry...
Do you not see me?
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WatchMeFlyAway
A contest entry
- ROUND 2 Make Me Laugh,Make Me cry, Or Make Me Think More Options inside! Something differnt!! by Sheilasbabygal4life.
650 points, ended September 17, 25 entries
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It's very sad piece...
"I was once your best friend.
Now I mean nothing to you." - it's definitely very depressing.
well written poem
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good poem
i do like almost all of ur poems but i have to ask if this is personal and true? if so i just want u to know its ok to move on from ur past just know u can grow from the experience. but over all good poem hun -
This was good. It was very moving. Thanks so much for entering and best of luck to you in this contest. Congrats you made it to the next round!
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