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A clean world

Rain cleans humainty's soul,
all Angels begin singing
beautiful hymns in praise.

A contest entry

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  • Arkbear gold member
    September 14
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    ....too many syllables for three L's Sweety -

     

    Very pretty though

     

    Bear -

     

     


  • daviscth
    September 13
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    This is such a wonderful poem dear. You have made me smile. Good luck in the contest.

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    September 13
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    Lovely thought sweetheart. Just wonderful.
    Thanks for sharing.
    Love Daddy


  • Melodies
    September 13
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    An especially lovely poem, good Genna. Fine imagery!


  • Stickboy
    September 12
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    what a beautiful thought, you did a great job on this, i wish you luck in the contest

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