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Fall

Is the best

Time of season

And a good reason

To place out the forage

Beautiful shades of orange

Red, yellow, green, and brown

Falling leaves all over the ground

They're ever so vibrant and lively

Psychedelic colors twirl around me

Wind gust aroma of pumpkin pies

Turkey shaped clouds in the sky

Clothes are laid out for school

Candy corns eaten by ghouls

Great times are at the fair

I'm amazed as I glare

Watching the

Leaves

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    A

        L

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Author notes

Here are your choices.

1. Be inspired by your favorite season.
2. Write about the season that is ending.
3. Write about the season that is starting


I chose #3

In a list

A contest entry

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Comments

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  • Wutz Luv
    October 13
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    Really nice poem, love the leaf shape. Great job!


  • FloridaGatorQueen silver member
    September 28

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    This is an awesome poem. I like the shape of the leaf you made. I loved the imagery too. I enjoyed the read!!! Thank you for entering my contest.


  • Kari gold member
    September 26

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    This is the first one that I've read with this format. Awesome format and the poem is excellent.

    Thanks,
    Kari


  • JustSimplyLissa gold member
    September 24

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    I love how you made a leaf It's very beautiful! And the poem itself is just awesome. Thank you for the entry!


  • jcat gold member
    September 16

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    I would have to say beyond impressive!!! Love the colours and the lay out, nicely done on the rhyme and the flow and the over all effect combined is just stunning!! Love the depth of creativity.....Just all in all a most wonderful piece! Thank you for your entry!!


  • Still Standing gold member
    September 15

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    Impressive Indeed

    this form and the colors are most impressive, you really outdid yourself, with forming the leaf and talking about the great times that fall brings and the colors you used to represent fall, just an overall impressive write. Thanks for entering and good luck!


  • Swangrnv gold member
    September 13

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    IMPRESSIVE!!

    As I stand up cheering, you young lady should take a bow!! this is outstanding, the form and the flow and content are exceptionally well done..

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