about the thread count in the Egyptian cotton sheets.
Compared their softness to the "wallow all over the bed",
still "warm from the dryer" feeling of cotton from the good old U.S. of A.
Maddening pillow fights ensued from this debate.
Tangled arms and legs along with knowing hands tickled other body parts
that demanded tender patient lovemaking
which culminated in a rough gasping satisfying fuck.
Then, they argued about who would sleep in the wet spot.
Both won.
They fell asleep sticky and happily entwined.
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cool
I like this one haha! Good work!
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once again a very great piece from you...i love your style...raw and honest!!
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WHHOA lil momma, I detect a shift in style. Girl this is raw as hell! Love the imagery in this, subtle, yet, stood out and made me actually see and feel the words and not just read them. Thats whats up. U always give me ideas when I read your stuff. Much love and respect to you always!
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I loved this! What fun!
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Ha ha !!
Loved this write.
Left me smiling....great work.
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LOL. Perfect
I wish that all marital arguments could be as important and settled in the same manner as this. Very well done. You put a smile on my face with this one.
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WOOOOOW!!
Damn, this was UNEXPECTED!! l.o.l. damn love how you threw in that naughty like that lady! l.o.l. damn.. i never saw it cumming! l.o.l.
sorry couldn't resist that one! this is sweet, and hot.. bravo poetess!
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Good to c u again!
I have been missing your raw work I guess I have been slacking. You have done a swell job with this one! It packed a nice sweaty sticky punch!
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I loved it!
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lol, now this was something..
Dirty minded woman!
Haha, I loved it!
I liked how they both won and slept happily sticky together..
This was my kind of poetry..
You rock!!
-Mandi
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