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look down, look up

here we are
or are we?
all this time makes you think
of love's immortal basis
and of its fragile existance
when it was just a simple day
complex nights made it fade into glory

when you cry out for help just do one thing
look down at who you are
then look up and who you'll be
standing in front of those gates
you'll see that it's ok
when everything just glimmers into view

but don't fret when those knees collapse from within
because I'll be there to help you back up
as I have for all these years
no matter what
no matter who

here we are
or are we?
all this time makes you think
of love's immortal basis
and of its fragile existance
when it was just a simple day
complex nights made it fade into glory

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