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UnIntelligent Design

You are welcome to believe
In Infinite Power creating
This World
This Life
Every single cell in every single body
That created us with one heart so easily broken
One jaw too small for our teeth
One code but a frame shift away from signaling our early demise.

Believe in heaven and the power of the soul
But keep your Idiot God away from mine.

Author notes

Yeah, I suppose I was intentionally insulting here, but I'm still working on re-discovering my voice, and sometimes the brutal statements help with that.

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  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    September 12
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    A tad harsh? Perhaps. But it is poems like this that keep things interesting. Well done.

    Mike