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A Cross T[r]ick ACT

.                  A Cross Trick
ACROSTIC                                ACROSTIC

A Controlled Response Offered Simply To Incite Curiosity
Actively Catalyzes Reply Open Sourced, Thus Invites Complicity
As Creativity Releases One’s Subtle Thoughts Indicting Conformity

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A  play  on  words,  from alpha  to omegA
Conditions mind-sets through techniques linguistiC
Revealing    fresh  allusions   which  aja R
Open the  nervous floodgates  of  the egO.
Simplicity  at  times appears  just  tacticS,
Too  difficult,  confusing,  which   restricT
Inspired trick  interactions  which  the  ‘I’
Creates  to  coin  illusions in  a  cross  tiC !
 

 

 

Author notes

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Title acrostic
A
Cross
T[r]ick
ACT

wor[l]ds in [b]rackets convey two or more meanings :

T[r]ick  = trick, tick or tic

ACROSTIC acrostic for first letters of each word in the first part
ACROSTIC vertically at beginning AND end of each line in the second part

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  • Hikari Lady
    September 24

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    Wonderful, very thoughtfully written and I liked the multiple shapes and forms of the acrostic. It has taken me into a new level of poetry where I explored something totally new for me. thanks for entring and good luck. ♥

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    ~Noor


  • sinfull
    September 14
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    play words tumble

    Into new meanings...rearranged. Clever word play.

    A llowed response incites imagination
    C ontrol the image for your contemplation
    R espondent has her own consideration
    O ver and above your self-fixation
    S urely this won't cause undue vexation
    T empting one unknown from relaxation
    I n fact it rescues one from isolation
    C ontrol relinquished without further.....hesitation


    • Jonathan ROBIN
      September 14

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      S ome praise "control relinquished" yet retain
      I solation's haven safe from touch,
      N or, though they beacon beckon, dare explain
      F ixation focus on protection : such
      U nease must be dissolved as joy's refrain
      L eaves value judgements far behind to gain
      L ight, laughter linked to soothe soul from past smutch.


      • sinfull
        September 30

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        J ustify relinquish if you please
        O ften service paid to lips appease
        N o beacon beckons brighter than a dare
        A llow fixate for few find focus fair
        T empation to explain protection ?seems
        H indered words like smutch (her beacon beams)
        A ppropriate to hesitate, retain
        N eed some control to gaurd against loss/gain