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Unwritten book

For anyone who cares
I know a tale about a father
But it wasn't proven true
So, why should I bother?

This was a twisted man
With a two-sided mind
One half loved his kids
The other, not so kind

Of three, there was two girls
which he'd always videotaped
Not playing, nor smiling
But instead being raped

I will not tell any further
I don't want to make you sad
You just needed to know
Not everyone needs a dad

This is the unwritten book
A story no one will find
The tale stitched in my body
and carved into my mind

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Yes, this is a true story. and yes, it is about me.

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  • AndrianTimeswift
    September 24, 2009

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    Oooh! Very nice! It has good flow, a strong message, and some strong emotion thrown in. It's not overly long, but it has enough length to convey its message well. My sympathies regarding your past.


  • honeychinadoll
    September 12, 2009
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    Anyone can be a daddy but it take's man to be a father....Great poem!