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Wake Up

        Wake me up. I know I am asleep: if I was awake then things would not be going my way. I have gotten everything I have ever wished for.

You’re not asleep.

        Time is an illusion; she is an illusion. This can not be real.

Some times what you want is not what you want when you get it -- you will never be content.

      But I feel content. She is here.

She is someone else. Both of you have become different people.

      I refuse to believe that.

Than you will remain in your delusion, and unhappiness.

      She will be here forever and always… with me.

She will leave you. She thought you were another the same as you thought she was another.

      God, if you are right: I want somebody to wake me up.

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  • Heroesrox
    October 13
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    This is really good, Marc.

    You get better and better with every write and your wording is really nice.

    Awesome stuff.


  • Sleep isforthe Weak
    September 12
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    This was good, I really like the line: "Time is an illusion; she is an illusion. This can not be real. "
    Nice job