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How To Turn Laughs into Screams

You approach unrestricted suffering
along this wild trail
with the ambition for revenge
and untainted rage if you fail

His warped ring of laughter
The pleasure of your scream
He is there in your eyes
His virus pollutes your dreams

Your innocence is spoiled
Your life meaning is drained
Make him reach destruction
Push him into your pain

His agony is your breath
It's aching to be let out
Stab into his heart
and inhale while he shouts

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  • Sheilasbabygal4life
    September 12
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    This was a very moving poem. Thanks so much for entering and best of luck to you in the contest!