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The End

As I looked into your eyes
And we made our plain goodbyes
All I knew was I could not
Leave believing, "this is it."

So we said we'd meet again
And we named the place and when
But we both knew we would not,
Both believing, "this is it."

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  • glenn shannon silver member
    September 19
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    sad but so often the way we end without saying it just knowing very clever and cool as

  • Purrsanthema
    September 14

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    This is so beautiful and so succinct that it's a jewel! You have refined it to a diamond!


    • Frodofan silver member
      September 14
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      Thank you! I hadn't written anything in too long...

  • catstar
    September 12

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    I thought this was short but extremely powerful. I would pick out my favourite lines except I would end up copying the entire poem into my comment. So I will settle for saying I loved it all.