Isnit it strange the way we encourage the
T
R
U
T
H ?
And yet we choose to write what everyone else
S
E
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S ....
...How can we possibly begin to imagine what's
B E Y O D---
When we don't even gaze across our
----H--O--R--I--Z--O--N--S---?-----
I relish in the way it stops and STARES
At those strange induviduals.
Those who choose to sit with their eyes wide \SHUT./
And those who weave the delicate, thin thread of make believed dreams.
How does mankind make so many mistakes
And pretend it never happened?
Truth and peace are as bad as Lies and War.
"Tell the truth and you'll be dammned...
...But if you Lie I will curse you still."
How can we tell the truth when it can only exist from our lies?
Peace is only a state between War.
looking forward to peace is to find
That war is just
around
the
CORNER!!
I spit on mankind as it wades through
Torn treaties and shattered Prophecies.
We might as well shake hands with our enemies.
"pleased to meet you... 'Till the next war."
How can one prey for peace when it only exists beside War?
k, this is shit, but... Im uninspired and I haven't written anything for ages... so yeah.
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wow
this had a structure that took my breath away..simply superb..you had highlighted all that was important in a hung out structure...lying as well truth statements are problematic..so true..you are very talented dear! -
Beautfiul write that has left me lost for words
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Interesting concept... I would debate the fact that there always has to be war, though I see where you come from. The nature of mankind is to fight, I suppose. It's not shit, it's actually pretty good. Although the spelling in the first line is a little off.
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Nice
well well i can see what you mean by shit it doesn't flow as good as it used to but that's the only prob in it your flow needs a little more work to get it back to it's standards but the emotion is well exspressed and easy to follow and yeah i can see your point if you tell the truth it will and up in pain or not but if you lie it always comes back and kicks you in the ass but all in all great poem makes alot of sense in today's corupt world just the flow
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