as the Autumn leafs fall i see your shadow up on us all knowing that man kind will be are greatest fall as i follow you down down the path i know this wicked world will not last the only thing that brings hope within us all is knowing that you will come to call and as i walk hand and hand with a shadow of a great man i have come to understand that that man is the love within the land
Author notes
this is from my heart god has seen me through alot
A contest entry
- your shadow... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended September 26, 9 entries
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A poem of hope and love. Well done.
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a nice thoughtful sentiment shared in your lines. in better hands than His we cannot be - no doubt.
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The intimacy here in the words brings the feelings of the connection with this great nature which is known as the Almighty..love the take..and many thanks for the poem..
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A sentimental poem that tugs at the strings of who you are, and the person zach deserves, awsome write..
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