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Have I the Right?

      The salt water bursting from my eyes
  creates a burning sensation like no other,
          stinging even the tips of eyelashes
        as it gushes out onto my cheekbone
          and strenuously gives in to gravity.


                                             
                                                Raw fingers swipe at the pesky tears
                                        just like a horse at a fly; knowing full-well
                                          that the victim has the right to be there.


                   

                                  And I?
Have I the right to be there?
               



Author notes

I was actually trying to answer a question in this,
but I just don't have a fucking clue.



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