Hand grasps scalpel, sharp it cleaves...
Cut around the face...
Into the dirty sink, blood it leaves...
Strands of blood, from skin to bone...
Peeling away, bleeding visage...
Into gory metal crate, its thrown...
Surgical scissors clip away...
Muscle and ligaments...
The face, beautifully flayed...
Bloody scissors, come to rest on grimy metal tray...
Hand slowly reaches and grips surgical blade...
Cutting away eyes, blood dripping, morbid display...
Single dying, hanging light bulb over head...
Casting lurking shadows...
Room of decay, the walls crawling with dread...
Blade coated in bleeding...
Cut away, flesh and muscle...
Into the sink, gore is feeding...
Nose, off of face amputate...
Blood, oozing and falling into sink...
Scrape more muscle, no need to sedate...
Scrape away the lingering flesh...
With gory surgical blade...
Cut away from face, warm and fresh...
Set down, surgical blade...
Dim light above...
Tilt head slightly...
Admire, in the light dull...
Quietly staring...
Into the mirror, at the skull...
The blood glistens in the light...
This work of absent sanity...
This beauty, this gruesome vanity.
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Cut away...the flesh......
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Man you sure do have a way to drag in the reader and scare the living daylights outta them, yet keep 'em all commin back again and again....
Kickass yet again
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*smirks*
yea. this is badass. real badass. bravo.
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ooohhhh beutifully gory .... god I have missed reading your writes dammit !!
Absolutely loving the ending to it!!! The flow and rhyme works well
keep up the great wrk x DD
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kickass. i dont think i've ever read anything so beautifully morbid on here. i loved the end.
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wow dark brother. you never disapoint! damn this was gruesome and spine chilling....i loved it hehe loved some of your lines like the walls crawling with dread...LOVED that. gore feeding...another great bit.
loved it 
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It didn't add the best part!!! LOL
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What more can I add... hmmm.... :0) It's once again something that depicts the story so thoroughly that the images are just burned in your brain!!!! Great imagery and the fear factor was awesome... then again all you work is great!!!!
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you know how to write gore, for sure... oh my. you think i woud learn to read this in the daylight. lol... another good horror write
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Dark and gruesome indeed. There are quite a number of images here that I found to be memorable and...seaching for the right word here...perhaps meaningful, that is to say there was truth and perhaps a lesson...anyway another epic write here bro.
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I have to say you are one of the best dark and gory poet that I have ever read. great descriptions you used for this piece. keep on penning.
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Ok, so this is gross as shit, and disturbing to say the least, but that's what I love about it. You did an awesome job with this write.
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as he flayed the face and cute the skin
that covered the soul as the blood glistened
words come to mind of the satisfaction
he finds and derives in the desires of flesh
well penned to style Hugs always Luv Angel♥
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Very snazzy. The imagery is excellent along with the flow. The structure of this poem was also very snazzy. The scene you painted for the reader was done with an amazing amount of skill and clarity. A gorgeously gruesome write.
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omg! That is so wickedly gruesome, but so damn good!!!
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