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pollination









lately she misses
herself: the way
a line rushes from the anther of moon
to the stigma of her muse - this long process
complete with wind and
running water


she wonders
if stars will ever litter
the backyard of her diaries
or lavender-scented notebooks

and goes down yet again
in a series of curses
and
whispers
of

this doesn't make any fucking sense







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  • Cat
    October 3

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    sometimes the best stuff comes from a line which doesnt make at any sense when you first hear it in your head...
    very nice stuff here.. thank you

    m


  • chilali
    September 21

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    brilliant!

    ''she wonders
    if stars will ever litter
    the backyard of her diaries
    or lavender-scented notebooks''

    wow


  • tara wilson gold member
    September 14

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    this is excellent...esp. "this long process
    complete with wind and
    running water"




  • zochit2me gold member
    September 12

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    Oh I soooooooo know this feeling

    Write and scrap...write and scrap...it is like a never ending curse

    This is very good indeed