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Beyond Orion’s Belt

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I’ve come to visit you today
So don’t be shy – don’t run away
I’m only here to lend a hand
To give you help now if I can

I know I look a little scary
And understand why you are wary
But really I am very nice
And want to give you some advice

I come from out beyond the stars
You cannot see them where you are
A little left where you are knelt
Just beyond Orion’s belt

It really is a pretty place
And I can see upon your face
A little fear but trust in me
I’m only here to help you see

We know your earth is in a mess
And all of human kind I guess
But do not worry ‘bout your fate
There still is time, it’s not too late

A little guidance to help you by
Is coming down from out the sky
From way out there beyond the blue
We’ll show you what you need to do

So when the night is falling black
You’ll know that we are coming back
We’ll see you through another day
And help to guide you on your way

We’ll see you’ll see your future bright
As you join us in eternal flight
A little east where you are knelt
Just beyond Orion’s belt

12.9.2009


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  • daffodilblossom
    October 24

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    i like this i have written some outer space pieces but dont feel brave enough to put them online yet for criticism lol


    • condor gold member
      October 24
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      Thank you and don't worry about putting your pieces online. I would love to read them. I have had some very strange experiences in this area and it is a subject that is right up my alley. Criticim will only help to further your wonderful works. Give it a try.


  • Legend silver member
    September 12
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    Excellent


  • Mango Memories gold member
    September 12

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    Whoa.... Breathtakingly beautiful. And i love how you finished it off.


    • condor gold member
      September 12
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      Thanks, mate. Glad you liked this one. I'll come by tomorrow as I'm off to bed in a jiffy.


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    September 12

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    Excellent! Although the date on this has me a little confused. Are you writing about a coming event? I any way It's a great poem. They couldn't do any worse than some of humnankind has already done to themselves and each other.
    Gaylene

    • condor gold member
      September 12
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      It took me a whole day to realize what you were saying about the date. lol. I couldn't see it yesterday, must be my cold....that's my excuse....Better run off and check the other ones I put on.

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