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Sunset~Fevers~Bliss



Bathe me
In tomorrow

Shower me
in dusk


Mother Earths
warm soft lips

 

Smoulder moist

sun baked kiss


A moonlight blush
A heavenly glimpse

Drenches day
awakens night


Lovers Swoon

igniting Moon

Love and Joy

unite ~anew~

Sunset fevers

~immortal bliss~

 

Bathe me
in tomorrow

Shower me
in dusk

 

Author notes

Contest prompt: a gift for poet: Toomysterious to celebrate your 2nd year anniversary!

A blues song that was one of the first I ever heard:
Peggy Lee made it famous!

Song: FEVER
Link to ENJOY:
(simply click on link to give your soul a jolt!)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R-eyS1uluuY&feature=related
Artist: Eva Cassidy

Congratulations on TWO YEARS on AP!
pic credits: above: huni-haze@glittergraphics.com
below: sandratralala@glittergraphics.com


(i hope a couple master poets pick up on this song and unleash it's beauty and magic)

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Comments

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  • Stoneface Gremlin
    September 19

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    A really enjoyable read

    I really love how much this poem allows my mind to enjoy the images that your words ignite. It is mellow yet, captivating. It truly makes one dream of times such as these


  • Ez Writer silver member
    September 19

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    An exquisite write ! You have painted a
    dreamy , sensual and delightful portrait !
    A poetic vision of delight ...
    Thank you for sharing , a pleasure to read !!
    Best wishes & hugs , Friend Easy


  • isabelwk
    September 19
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    to the point

    nicely done. Flows well. My favorite line was "Bathe me in tomorrow." Good metaphor.


  • Micah Young
    September 18
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    It gave me a peaceful feeling ... great work.


  • Wickedruby1 gold member
    September 16
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    Very good

    I remember Peggy Lee but not the song,she was a beautiful person and singer
    This song shows a lot of longing and sadness


  • Keith
    September 16

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    I like this a lot. If we had sunsets like that in Scotland, ah'd open up the beach and sell ice cream. Well, at least we've got the palm trees (I kid you not!). Have some applause.


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    September 15

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    this is just gorgeous!! and ohhhh so sultry!
    i just love sultry, i followed it down the page
    the images you brought to this piece were just breathtaking!!

    thank you so much for this!!

    stunning!!

    I think i will have say that i knew you
    when my dear, you know I sing blues
    and mostly i sing songs that i turn to blues.
    this Eva Cassidy have a beautiful set of pipes

    with love and blessings

    Rend


  • Black--Wings
    September 13

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    This is a intense write the repeated words at the end giving the reader a sense of confirmatio


  • smitaanand
    September 12

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    The lines have wove with magical feel. the words'Lovers Swoon ,Igniting Moon' are especially very meaningful. Thanks for this foray into you thoughts through the gateway of poetry...


  • toomysterious
    September 12

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    Thanks for all your sweet comments in authors notes. This is as lovely as the sunset depicted in the picture and as sultry as the song. Love it. Thanks again, I'm really going to have my work cut out for me in the judging.


  • HugsForEveryone
    September 12

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    WOWZERS
    THIS WAS FREAKIN AMAZING.
    If I were you I would go like, publish that or something.
    I would totes buy it if you did.
    Relaxing =]
    I loved it, lovelovelove.


  • Stickboy
    September 12

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    another great piece you have penned, thanks for sharing this, reading your poems help take my mind off all my worries, best of luck in this contest, your doing great

  • a u r a
    September 12

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    Gosh! this piece is breathtakingly beautiful-the backdrop is mesmerrising-your poem is tranquilising-the combination is mindstormingly lethal- I have liked your poem a whole bunch


  • Bluemonday silver member
    September 12

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    "Loved Fever". This poem is so soft and sensual I love it...Dan good luck in the comp..Dan

  • Macsword
    September 12

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    OOHs! and AHHHs!

    The presentation, words, sense of nature and quiet all roll into this piece with remarkable ease. I enjoyed this read very much poet.


  • Puppydog gold member
    September 12

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    PASSIONATE AND LOVELY!!!!

    This sets the mood so beautifully! A time filled with the sweet bliss of love!! 's


  • Hikari Lady
    September 12

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    Very soft to read, kind of like a dream. Truely a beautiul poem, thanks for sharing it.

    Love
    ~Noor


  • white stone
    September 12

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    Showered with light and wrapped in revelation. Calming and peaceful. Natural, which I like the best. Dig it.


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    September 12

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    Ooooooh. This was so beautiful. I loved the imagery in this. Absolutely stunning, sis.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~

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