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I have a love that lived across the world
and lived in the darkness.

Time has no faith for the our
love. Death becomes love and
hate becomes life a thing in the
past.

My love hated everything light
and I was hated by everything
dark.

But for our love I crossed the
divine line and entered his world
and his world a long.

I let the dark in to take over
the life that I am willing to let go
for our love.

My love was great and ready for
me to come to his side of the
world.

I closed my eyes to the light for the
last time and open them to a new
world in the dark.

Know my life filled with life
and love and embraced the
willing of life over love.

My distance love is no longer far
apart from each other.
Now we are joined in the
dark by love and blood.

And yes my love of the life is
an Vampire of true time and
past..

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