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Ballerina In A Snow Globe

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Reminded of a serenade lost
In this surreal winter night
moved by the tune of this
broken record in a heated
love in a distance danced
to a good night kiss
what is left to say
other then good bye
if it only ended this way
this world is no place for lovers

and thrives like us
broken and tossed into
that dusted shelf lost
to time blackened in shame
to dance till the end of time
waiting for that one last kiss
just to dance under the moon
and have that one last good bye
a perfect wet winter wonder land

what is left to say
other then good bye
if they all only ended
this way in a surreal
winter night


dancing till the end of time

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

2) this world is no place for lovers and thrives like us.

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  • Haley-baby1
    September 21
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    Very nice dear. I like your take on the prompt.


  • blueyez
    September 13

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    I love this!!! It's kinda sad...


  • Midnight Raeven
    September 12

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    very well written

    This was different then your usual stuff, my love. I liked how you made it into a poem about being left behind without that one person you crave to dance with. Being alone can suck on so many levels and I am so happy that we have each other to dance with in harmony for the rest of our lives. I love you, Robert!

    Good luck in the contest!

    Love always your wife,

    Virginia