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run

Her feet fall on the pavement; specks of dust lunge, uprisen, from her.
Her breath comes in pants, a heavy, ugly sound, laboured and wheezing,
Yet between each loud inhale, she speaks softly though soundly to herself,
"Run," she says.

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not done yet sorry

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